Sunday, January 6, 2013
self introduction
My name is Geon Heo and I'm going to be in sixth grade. I like to play soccer and listening to music. I like fluorescent colors. I like to play FIFA online 3 and LoL. My favorite food is hamburger and pizza. I like to read 'hunger game' in my free time and I like watching 'Naruto' . I like almost every thing in my life. But there is just one thing I hate and it is the place I'm living and my friend's mom. She is the most disgusting and the ruddest person I have ever met my long life. Anyway this was my introduction.
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You're a good writer. Keep up the great work. There's nothing much to say about your introduction.
Man, I wouldn't like to meet your friend's mom. Why do you hate her so much? I hope you meet better friends and teachers in this camp. Nice to meet you! :)